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Teagan
I like all of your drawings they are really nice. I also like the background music.
Levi
Nice story! I like the idea of this story!
Austin
That drawing of the old friend with the black box that said liar on it goes hard
Max
Love the art style and the use of music to convey the emotions of the scene. Some sound effects would be a nice touch, like for the breaking of the plates. Engaged with the story. Amazing work!!!
Julian
nice story
Adinnah
I love how the music mixes with the plot, and the story is great! Great job!
Jan Carlo
I the music got me more engaged and the story was nice and tells a good message about how you should treat peope
Sophia Rose Imelda
The story is very clear, and the music really pushes the narrative! The conflict was also engaging. Really kept me at the edge of my seat
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Not Your Everyday Ghost Story
Transcription in video. Hope you guys like the final outcome!
Special thanks to my dad for helping me through the process!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Emily Matthews
Emily
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