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Ava
I like the story and the voiceovers are really good, great job!
Grace
Great work! I love the story and the drawings. I love the voiceover too! This is such a unique, creative story.
Zhilu
I love the voice!
Eli (1 like)
I love the voice acting on this video! It works really well and is executed great. The recording is good and articulate and very clear. There are a few interesting pops and crackles in the background though. I like the conflict you picked and I think this is very relevant in the world today. I am a bit confused on how Gilda was able to so easily get her method implemented, and I am a bit confused on what the moral of the story is. Overall I love the story and I think it is really good and very well executed and effective.
Aisa
i like the story
Blanki
I like how you shaped the story, your drawings are good.
Johnathan
it was good sketch was also good
Luis
I love the way the story was unraveled and the central idea of it.
Haley
Very cool story. I like how the story is played out. Why did Gilda have dreams about turning fairies into humans?. I think the pictures good be clearer about what the story is trying to say.
Edna
I like how the idea was presented
River (1 like)
I love how stylized the characters are. The story was relatively clear! Especially compared to some of the other submissions I've had to judge this week. I can tell there is a lot of potential! I only really have minor nitpicks like it could use more color, sound effects, or background work, etc. Great job! :D
Roman
This is a nice idea and i like how it plays out
Braden (1 like)
I love the idea of the story and how it is presented! I do wish there was music and sound effects, but otherwise it was great.
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Dream
Dream follows a fairy named Gilda through her new experience as the squad leader of a team of fairies. Through trial and error, her and her community begin to learn there is more than one way to do things.
I worked on this film solo, but I want to thank all the Pixar artists and alumni that helped make this program possible, as well as the other program participants for providing me with feedback, inspiration, and motivation every week. Thank you all so much. I look forward to learning more from Pixarians in the future.
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