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Ian
Great story! I wish there were more characters with speaking roles than just Benjamin, that would make this a stronger story. I wonder if it was Benjamin being an outlaw was what turned people away from him.
Sophia
Fun and entertaining! Quite a rebellious outlaw with a cowboy vibe just wanting friends. The story has good structure and great potential!
Makena
I love the character interactions!
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Lonely Cowboy
Sad cowboy
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Team:
Ava, Aiden, Mason, Hailey
Aiden, Ava
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