Mason

I like the potential this W.I.P. shows. It could be a very emotional story.

Marlene

I really like how it is animated a bit, it just gives it a little bit of life, however, I cannot discern a whole lot about your story or the characters from this other than the main character cares a lot about the birds in the picture frame? But you have done a good job of setting the mood and I can tell that you do draw well.

Blanki

The illustration you gave him is very good.

Marco

I like the animation

Hanna

I liked the detail put into the characters, and I loved the color of the sky in the background. I wasn't sure what perspective the last image was from (like the main character or another character in the story). I would love to see this story further developed, like by being longer or having more detail in the events that take place.

Mckenna

I really like all your pictures. I think you need to add more details because I was confused on what kind of work he was doing and if he was saying goodbye to his family. I like how calm it is.

Solomon

I really like the animation for your video, as it simplistic yet unique. I do wish that the video was a bit more longer, so you elaborate on who he was talking to and what work he is going to, but it is very comforting overall.