Jackie

That was really a creative story. I was drawn in by your art & title. I was amazed at how you were able to have Marin change into so many characters, and how easy it was for me to recognize her with the blue eyes. That was an excellent idea to have Marin have blue eyes. I laughed when she became a dragon, and all we could see was her eye in the window. What a great idea to show Marin as a dragon, by just drawing her eye in the window. If you refine this more, please let me know, as I'd love to see it again. I wish you well & hope you will be blessed with many opportunities to use your creativity to be a blessing. Kind regards from the Isles of the Sea, jAckie =)

Cheyenne

Thank you so much for taking a look at my work, and for those kind words! I do plan on refining this story even more. Reach out to me on Instagram, if you have it! my username is @peppersketch_

Andrea (3 likes)

This story is so beautiful! I know this is also a storyreel but I feel you’ve done the job of demonstrating us the characters happiness and distress perfectly. I also like the touch of giving your main character blue eyes to demonstrate the power, it also gives a dynamism to the character. I wouldn’t change anything to your story, i think it’s very straightforward. I would only add that maybe, when the main character is sitting as an old lady talking to the lady walking, you could transform her or make a notice to say that she was the one who had given them the spell. Maybe a change of hair? Or eyes? Or maybe transforming themselves. Overall, i think this is such a great story!! Congratulations!!

Andres

I like the idea and the way to talk bout this.