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Levi
Great story! I like how Stella keeps meeting new characters.
Bella
I love the story! It was very heartwarming and had a lovely message <3 One thing I would suggest to make it stronger would be to play into visual storytelling a bit more and maybe add some details to the drawings to spice it up! Overall, love it
Aisa
i really like the drawings
Sugey
Pretty interesting storytelling, its very unique
Jacinta
This would be great for kids and the story was clear and I love the drawings
Roen
The message of the story is very good. It would make a great kids movie because of how kids always get cliquey and jealous of their friends.
Kyla (1 like)
I like the ending message of the story. The drawings are cute. Maybe some music could move the story along and go a little slower so we can feel the feelings of Stella.
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Stella
This is Stella’s story on accepting that there is more than one person out there for her!
I would like to give thanks to everyone who has made this happen. I would like to thank my language arts teacher who found this for me. I would like to thank Mia for her beautiful art work! I would also like to give a shout out to the Pixar artists who take time do this, and to everyone who submitted a reel because it can be difficult to put your self out there!! I have really enjoyed these past few weeks! Nice job everyone!
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Mia&KylieCreates
Kylie, Mia
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