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Kim (1 like)
I'm so glad I get to review this bc I'm a fan! What I find compelling is the theme of greed versus protecting the earth, and I love that Jade actually gives themself to the cause/the earth to protect us all. Really beautiful story. I also appreciate that this team had the courage to push the envelope with subject matter and an onscreen death. The art has turned out absolutely beautiful.
Kennedi
Thanks Kim! We appreciate the wonderful feedback each week. We're glad you enjoyed our story.
Joshua (1 like)
Weird story/ in a good way. Story was clear. Great illustration and the narrative voice was excellent.
Francisco (1 like)
Nice job! I really liked the color palette. The story is simple and well done. Finally, I found Jade really appealing and her journey is neat. Congrats! :)
James (1 like)
I have really enjoyed the transition that this story has made. I think the cuts worked out and the audio helped play a role in the final piece. I hope you and your team continue on with more. Take a chance to review mine im looking for feedback.
Enkhee (1 like)
I love your story. Well done!
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Eternal Jade
Once upon a time an ambitious researcher named Jade, drove through an abandoned village in the Amazon to meet up with a previously sent research team.
Everyday they traveled back and forth with the team into the jungle. Reviewing notes and sketches. Looking for this mysterious healing plant and the missing villagers.
Until one day, Jade discovered a strange glowing plant that seems to be leading deeper into the rainforest.
Because of that, Tao approaches Jade discreetly with machete in hand. There is false celebration of their discovery. Tao steals the plant from Jade. Tao is pierced through the chest by glowing vines.
Because of that, Jade is full of adrenaline and scared to grab the sample, but does so and takes off deeper into the rain forest. The research group discovers Tao and goes looking for Jade.
Because of that, Jade gets distracted for a brief moment and falls into a huge sinkhole. Breaking their leg on impact. Jade finds the origin of the plant and the missing villagers.
Until finally, the plant guardians emerge from the underground cave and surround Jade. The obelisk glows the same color as the plant in Jade's hand. The plant heals Jade and they transform into one being.
Ever since that day, Jade has been restoring the forest and protecting it from the outside world. Stopping any further exploitation of the forest's resources.
The moral of the story is the cycle of selfish gain is only broken by selfless deeds. Protect what is important to you.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Decaf Creatives: Andrew, Kennedi, Gabe, and Lylian!
Andrew, Gabe, Kennedi, Lylian
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