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Theresa

Lots of interesting drawings. Couldn't tell how it made sense. No narrative? So the images lacked a foundation and seemed random. Interesting moment falling off airplane.

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Anna

This is awesome! I suggest balancing the volume of the music and speaking - I wasn't able to hear about half of the dialogue. I also am quite unclear on the character arc, moral, and general plot of the story. I liked the art, and suggest that you focus on the verbal side of the story.

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Carlos

It was alright, but, I did not understand anything

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Cam

I like the music, but i could not understand what was going on at all.

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River

Nice! The music and the sound effects really make this one! I do wish there was a little bit more dialogue or even some text to explain some of the context behind the pictures. And also, there were some times when the music got really loud, and I could hardly hear the narrator over it. Just needs a little bit more tweaking! Great job :D

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Keya

i love the music!!! it sounds really nice and adds a really cool element to your storyreel. also i love how u included many languages, thats really unique and cool!!

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MLJ

Act 1 2 and 3

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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