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Theresa
Lots of interesting drawings. Couldn't tell how it made sense. No narrative? So the images lacked a foundation and seemed random. Interesting moment falling off airplane.
Anna
This is awesome! I suggest balancing the volume of the music and speaking - I wasn't able to hear about half of the dialogue. I also am quite unclear on the character arc, moral, and general plot of the story. I liked the art, and suggest that you focus on the verbal side of the story.
Carlos
It was alright, but, I did not understand anything
Cam
I like the music, but i could not understand what was going on at all.
River
Nice! The music and the sound effects really make this one! I do wish there was a little bit more dialogue or even some text to explain some of the context behind the pictures. And also, there were some times when the music got really loud, and I could hardly hear the narrator over it. Just needs a little bit more tweaking! Great job :D
Keya
i love the music!!! it sounds really nice and adds a really cool element to your storyreel. also i love how u included many languages, thats really unique and cool!!
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MLJ
Act 1 2 and 3
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Jude, Megan
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