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Averie
Great story. Good pictures.
Ian
Great Story. Why did the other king decide to invade King David? This would be stronger with clearer audio.
Jose
The story is great.
Pedro
this is some really cool castle i like it
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The two kingdoms.
The story is about two kingdoms.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Brian and Margret
Brian, Margaret
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