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An
Very intriguing story, the story makes me fathom about our history. I like the effort you put into this regardless of the sketches. Though one thing I can add is just try to adjust so that all the audios are on the same volume. Maybe adding some narration would be great as well. Overall great story and I love the effort.
Eli
This was certainly an interesting and engaging story. I like the effort put into the music and the auditory storytelling that is done, but I found that the volume of a lot of things felt a little off, and the story was a bit hard to understand without narration, especially since some of the subtitles supposed to explain it were out of frame. I also think that the music could be changed a little bit to fit the mood in certain places. I also find the subject matter a bit concerning, especially considering that the moral of the story seems to be in support of slavery, which I think is widely agreed to be not a great thing to support. Overall, I love all of the effort.
Julian
I found the story intresting but the artwork did not have agood flow. I would recommend narration.
Andres
dope story
Erik
The background music was nice. I'm a little bit confused on what time period this takes place in and how slavery still exists during said time period(if it's after the 19th century).
Hazel
I like the music you Chose for background music
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Week 8 of Pixar
This is are final submission of are Pixar video. This video is about slavery and how a character named Libby faces the challenges of standing up for herself well she try’s to make a difference In the world by ending slavery and become a famous history teacher telling her past story’s.
Enjoy!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Teem 18
Meagan
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