Emily

Knock off the boyfriend 😈 this looks like it’s gonna be awesome! I’m glad they’ll get along in the end, but them battling will be epic

Christina

Hahaha, ah, I'm still laughing at the idea of Winston the cat putting up traps for Steven; that's hilarious. This is such a fun idea. I love how it all happens inside one small NYC apartment--not only is it realistic, because the apartment would probably be Winston's whole world, but it really draws me into the moment and lets me escape in someone else's world for a bit. I also love how Winston's agency is equal to Steven and Mary's in the story, and he can really drive forward the conflict. I wasn't confused about any of it. I do wonder -- what does Steven do to retaliate? And what does Mary do that gives her so much power -- how does she convince them to knock it off? Overall, super fun. Great work.

Jordan

I love the simple story of the cat wanting more love from the owner when she started dating. There seemed to be more room for improvement in showing us more of the cats hijinxs and what the cat does more to make the boyfriend mad? Overall it's sweet and to the point.