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Stephanie (1 like)
nice music!
Julian (2 likes)
I thought this story was very good but there was some room for improvement. I think less narration and more characters talking to eachother would have been ber=tter but overall a well made storyboard.
Arabu (1 like)
I really love how the story was told very interesting i loved it
Joaquin (1 like)
I see the potential in this short, but it haves some little problems. The message is nice, but the microphone isnt in the best conditions to tell the story. It could have neen better if you used only the drawings to tell the story and discard the voice, the drawings of the storyboard are wonderful but a bit blurry. The music is great and fits perfectly with the storyboard.
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