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Hally Bellah-Guther (1 like)
This was absolutely wonderful and beautiful! The only small thing I have is that I don't think the moral needed to be spoken out so literally, something we did also but I have now seen other examples where it is shown rather than narrated and that is actually more powerful.
Varian (1 like)
What an endearing story. I'm happy Sebas got out of this circle that many many struggle with. Perfection can be a curse.
Wish to see more from these two brothers!
Jonathan (1 like)
Very heartwarming :)
If expanded out to a longer script it would be nice to see some more build and and tension with Sebas not wanted to try the brothers cupcake at first.
As it is now, super great job
Carol
I like this idea!. We might just do that. Thank you!.
Ahmira (1 like)
congrats ! i love this story so much the music flowing along and the editing of this is great !
Álvaro (1 like)
Hello Emma & Carol (Madrigal!!?? are you part of la familia Madrigaaallll!!?? aww :3 ) This is so very cute story!! I followed your journey, and I loved the theme of The little brother trying to help. The ending is so very perfect, I liked how Sebas didn't won't the competition, but still he learnt that having his awesome little proud brother encouraging and being happy was much important!! Kudos!! Good story :) All the very Best!!
Carol
Si. Colombiana tambien ;-) Thank you for your sweet comments.
Richard (1 like)
Great job! Lovely story! Congratulations on a really nice story reel.
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Sebas and Mau
By: Emma Taylor-Gilli and Carol Madrigal
Special Thanks: Anne Kim for your support.
This is a story two brothers, Sebas is boy that struggles with anxiety and perfectionis. An incident with his little brother Mau not only enriches their relationship but also helps both of them to see their worlds a little differently.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Blue Pearls
Anne, Carol, Emma
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